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That’s Better!

October 18, 2012

Well that’s better… I got to the FMG meeting early and pulled out a spiral notebook and restarted the story. As opposed to my original attempt, I stuck with the protagonist, describing things from his perspective as opposed to setting up the scenario. Everything flowed much better this time. I’ve still got a lot to do on it but it’s a better start. 

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